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600| Thu, 13 Dec 2007 14:06:00 GMT| itags.org Seeker| Comments (7)
I have noticed that a lot of people ask for constructive criticism for their site. That is exactly what I am looking for my website's homepage.
http://www.buntingresources.com
TIA!

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"Pregnancy
What You Need
To Eat Chart
Exercises and Rest
and More!"

there are 3 links here, and it's hard to tell that those words are 3 seperate messages or choices because they all run together without punctuation or breaks in the linking, and it's awkward because it's not a sentence.
Also, it's inconsistent because right next to it you have

"Wanting Baby
About preconception,
what options you have
for infertility and adoption."

where the first line is a link but the rest isn't, and yet obviously there ARE operate subjects and I'd think they would need different links. At least, if right next to them you're not afraid to link so much text, it doesn't match to get shy now :) Also, the capitalization doesn't match- in the other, you capitalized everything.

"Coupon and Deals Page "
plural or not? pick one

"If you need to travel, transportation of the milk is involuntary."
involuntary? there's got to be a more positive word for it

itags.org Seeker | Tue, 11 Dec 2007 02:28:00 GMT |

Wow, thanks cchrissyy.

I have company right now but I plan to work on my site tonight. I will consider all that you said. Thanks!

itags.org Seeker | Tue, 11 Dec 2007 02:29:00 GMT |

A couple of typos that stand out from the homepage:

newborn health not newborn's health

We try our best not we try are best

getting things for your family not you family

Planning on having a baby...add question mark at the end

itags.org Seeker | Tue, 11 Dec 2007 02:30:00 GMT |

How abut some information about the benefits to parents and baby of intact (uncircumcised) babies?

Also, information about Doulas and finding a doula.

Breast pump, bra and garment reviews?

With your web site (no product directly sold) you might consider a Q+A type format, "Ask Mommy Neeth". You need a picture of Mommy Neeth, and a cute baby (not necessarily your real baby)

itags.org Seeker | Tue, 11 Dec 2007 02:31:00 GMT |

A couple of typos that stand out from the homepage:

Thanks Quirky, it is so nice to have a fresh pair of eyes :eyes to look at it. I have seen it probably about a million bagillion times :dizzy: so thanks.

How abut some information about the benefits to parents and baby of intact (uncircumcised) babies?

Also, information about Doulas and finding a doula.

Breast pump, bra and garment reviews?

With your web site (no product directly sold) you might consider a Q+A type format, "Ask Mommy Neeth". You need a picture of Mommy Neeth, and a cute baby (not necessarily your real baby)

Holy Moly SleeplessMommy all on the first page? :dizzy: In my newborn health page I do have a link to a circumcision resource page and state that I don't think someone should circ their child and here is where you can find the information on why not.

(adding new things are really hard right now because I need to focus on WAH jobs that can get me money quickly, I have not had a whole lot of time to work on my site but I want to :( I have mainly been writing articles for money at the moment)

I have been wanting to do something like "where to find a midwife" "where to find a doula" "where to find information on UC" all that, it is inspiring to know that someone else thinks it is a good idea too.

I don't think I could do Q&A.:o I thought about if I should put a picture on my about page but I am just way to shy.:shy

I have been trying to improve my breastfeeding page, "Breast pump, bra and garment reviews?" is a really great idea.

Thanks for all the input.

itags.org Seeker | Tue, 11 Dec 2007 02:32:00 GMT |

A quick first impression - there is a LOT of text. I tend to gloss *right* over all the text. Colors and shapes (photosregister with people a *lot* quicker, and especially those people who are accustomed to the faster-paced "Internet World."

I think if you tidy up the text - that may help, too. I think you can fairly easily bold key words, and make the lines in order or width, to help with ease of reading.

itags.org Seeker | Tue, 11 Dec 2007 02:33:00 GMT |

A quick first impression - there is a LOT of text. I tend to gloss *right* over all the text. Colors and shapes (photosregister with people a *lot* quicker, and especially those people who are accustomed to the faster-paced "Internet World."

Ya, I tried to add more pictures, and still plan to. Problem is search engines won't pick you up if you don't have a lot of text. :dizzy: Thanks for the input, I added some colour.

UPDATE:

Well thank you all so much again.
:grouphug
I got sick:fever: and had a plugged duct at same time a couple days ago and it kind held me back from working (but I did make a new homepage banner). Since it at the end of the month I had to change things that were expiring. I feel like I put in a 14 hour day to day:dizzy:. So I think that I am going to call my homepage good . . . . for now. Thank you all so much again for looking at it.

Wish me luck in success.:fingersx:

itags.org Seeker | Tue, 11 Dec 2007 02:34:00 GMT |

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